Olivia's Learning Diary

Welcome to my learning diary This is a blog that I will keep updating you with the stuff I've been learning in Room 8 2011 . The reason why we blog is because why , Why just keep your writing in a book? If it is in a book only you and your teacher can see it or on the odd occasion you take your book home and your parents can see it. But on the blog you can let the world see it and get comments on what you need to work on and what you done well instead of just the teacher's comments .

Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Silentness

Can you hear that, it is the peace, the quiet, that is what it is .

Can you see that, it is the it is the birds, the bees, that is what it is .

Can you feel that, it is the hug of the sun, the breeze, that is what it is.

Can you smell that, it is the fresh mowed grass, the beautiful spring roses, that it what it is .

Can you taste that, it is the rich taste of cadbury dark chocolate that is what it is.

By Olivia Fraser

1 comment:

RubySeptember 20, 2011 at 6:27 PM
Hi Olivia,
Ruby D here, I like your poem it really describes silentness.
My favourite part is about the cadbury chocolate.
Keep it up!!!
From Ruby d
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